Reddit reviews Bedroom Mania: A Starstruck Romance

Hi!

Released this romance story a few days ago. Was a bit of a rushed job, but I really wanted to get something out before drowning in classes again.

Any critique/feedback would be much appreciated. I have a metric ton of stories swirling around my head and piled up in notes all over my desk. Longer books are a bit frightening, mostly because of my own bad habit of slowing down and procrastinating. Getting this book out was a bit of a hustle at the end, but I'm hoping I can ride my own momentum. And I'm sure I've made a ton of mistakes on this to learn from.