Reddit reviews Formation of Christian Theology, Vol. 2: The Nicene Faith (Part 1 & 2)

Sort of. You seem to accidentally be denying the divinity of Christ and thereby the Trinity. Try On The Incarnation, by Athanasius the Great, if you want something patristic. It's pretty great. If you want more contemporary or accessible works on this, The Way to Nicaea and The Nicene Faith by John Behr, a professor of patristics, are excellent.

I'd suggest The Way to Nicea and Nicene Faith by John Behr. He's an Eastern Orthodox patristics scholar known for his works on Irenaeus.