Reddit reviews Writing Fight Scenes: Professional Techniques for Fiction Authors (Writer's Craft Book 1)

. Orientalizing Mid/Far Eastern culture

. Opening with a huge chunk of worldbuilding

. Overlooking melee mechanics (this has helped me with that: https://www.amazon.com/Writing-Fight-Scenes-Professional-Techniques-ebook/dp/B005MJFVS0 )

. Understanding horse mechanics. They only go faster than walking if you press them. Keep forcing and the horse will die. Usually they're used by travelers to hold supplies and for long term relief.

. Ancient evils

Just a few off the top of my head. Hope this helps.

This book is more for writers describing combat, but I find the same principle applies:

https://www.amazon.com/Writing-Fight-Scenes-Professional-Techniques-ebook/dp/B005MJFVS0

Maybe this will help

This book will help you.