Reddit reviews Memorial: A Version of Homer's Iliad

Sorry, but i'm not sold on this. It works a bit as a digital sculpture (like this) or a performance piece maybe, but as poetry this falls flat, simply because I don't feel like reading more than a few lines. There is an emotional response, but it feels like a cheap Maya Lin memorial or a cheaper Oswald's Memorial. But there is still a response and i think that prompts further prodding into the form.