Reddit reviews The Dramatic Writer's Companion: Tools to Develop Characters, Cause Scenes, and Build Stories (Chicago Guides to Writing, Editing, and Publishing)
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There are definitely guidelines. Some are strict, but many of them can be bent.
Your script says "awesome as fuck". I don't know what that means. I need you to explain it. What makes it awesome? That's how you have to spell things out in a script.
But great work on hammering out a screenplay! If you're interested, here are some good books on screenwriting:
The line you mention from Django is really good. We see that it is a stereotypical western town. We all know exactly what that looks like because we gave seen those millions of towns in westerns before. For your line, we all have different interpretations as to what "awesome as fuck" is.
Did you use Celtx? If not, try it. Great free screenwriting software.
This is a really good book. Intended for stage and screen plays, but the foundations work for any type of writing. A bunch of exercises to try